Angel Purganan TS #9

Sunday June 1, 2020

3:00 PM

Halima

Topic/Skill: TOEFL Independent Writing Practice - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made it easier for people to connect on a deeper level. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Feedback provided: Halima had a bit of trouble developing on this topic. The first half of her essay was good but she struggled to come up with a solid second body paragraph. So I gave her some suggestions on what to write about in case there is a similar topic on the TOEFL

Lessons I learned: Technology and social media is a popular TOEFL topic so it is important for students to be well-prepared to speak on them.