Angel Purganan TS #6

May 24, 2020

4:00 PM

Halima

Topic/Skill: TOEFL Independent Writing Practice - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.

Feedback provided: Halima did very well on this essay. I graded her a 4/5. She had minor grammar mistakes that sometimes confused the reader but it was mostly very cohesvie

Lessons I learned: Even though the student writes a good essay, they must have a clear understanding of the prompt in order to properly respond to it.